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| The_Madness
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| Ok, so i had a moment of inspiration and i wrote the start of a story and i wanted some opinions. it has got some things to work out but here is the first paragraph and i can post the rest if you like it. so if you like it or not can you jut right good or not as a reply please There was a place on earth. Much similar to the fairy tales and legends of what mankind knows as “The Garden of Eden”. But the Garden of Eden is very much just that. A Legend. But this place it was no legend it was where all that was good and bad in the world gathered after it was released by man and animal. This was where new species were born and where old ones came to die, though the humans in their ignorance told themselves science was responsible for such a creation such as life, energy and emotions, they are sorely wrong. But humans…..ah humans, they are the most powerful species ever created and yet, they are the stupidest in equal if not more. |
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