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| Little_Ox
Posts: 190 Status: Baron Karma: +50 [+1] [-1]   |
Subject: Lumber mill | |||||
| Oh wow Little_Ox, you did an excellent job of training today, I better get a move on otherwise your going to be getting better than me! The comma after my name should be a semi-colon as it is a comma splice, and the 'your' you used implies I own something when it should be the conjunction of you are. (you're) So it would look something like this: Oh wow Little_Ox; you did an excellent job of training today, I better get a move on otherwise you're going to be getting better than me! |
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