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| Sir_Knuckle
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Subject: hmmm | |||||
| if I may say... you should work on your format. The poem itself is nice, and you obviously have a lot to offer. Very much promising, but I think some parts need to be worked on.. A little advice that I could offer is.. try to make it rhymes. It will sound much better. |
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